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Tuesday April 27th, 2010

The exercise:

Your Two Haiku Tuesday prompt this week: battle scars.

The pain seems to be a bit less today, so that's good. My mobility is still pretty laughable though.

Mine:

Beneath the bandage
a scar is lurking. I hope
that it looks badass.

*     *     *

In my youth I left
my heart unprotected. Now
these scars keep me safe.

Random note: while checking to see if badass was one word or two, I came across this site, which I have decided is insanely awesome. So go check it out.

3 comments:

  1. I've long gotten o'er
    the pain, the hurt. We talk, but
    the scars still linger.

    The mem'ries return:
    the studying, those... essays
    Come back to haunt me.
    - - - - -
    The last one's in reference to the wonderful and triumphant return of AP season. One test last year (for which I wrote three of thee absolute worst things I've ever written. Bar none)... five this year. With all the studying I've been doing, though, I should be alright.

    All the best on your recovery, 'Loo! ^^

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  2. The mobility will come back, unless, of course, you catch leprosy while you're recovering and your legs drop off. Then you might be a little hindered. But not to worry! If that happens, we'll get you a little go-kart to whizz around in....

    Ahem. I completely agree with haiku number one, and number two is undoubtedly true, if a little melancholy. Good work!

    And the badass site is something else, that's quite a find!

    Battle scars

    You took a scar home
    From every battle you fought:
    My tears wet them all.

    ------

    This pink scar tissue
    From wars long forgotten now
    Reminds me of you.

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  3. g2 - haha, for some reason the italicized 'essays' just makes that second haiku awesome :)

    Good luck with the school work and thanks for the well wishes!

    Greg - thanks for the encouragement :P

    I seem to be in less pain again today, so at least I'm heading in the right direction.

    Hmm, it's a tough pick between your two this week. So I'm going to cop out and say I like them equally :)

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