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Tuesday December 26th, 2017

The exercise:

Write two haiku about: naughty or nice.

3 comments:

  1. Mine:

    Coal in my stocking
    again? Well, guess what Santa?
    It was all worth it.

    * * *

    I don't think it's a
    good sign that it's so hard to
    write a Nice haiku...

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  2. Now that the Dream Kingdom prompt has slipped off the front page you might need to tell us when you've added to it :) Thank-you for your comments on my characters; maybe I could alternate months, with one month being devoted to developing existing characters and the next being more freeform. Let's see what the New Year brings!
    I like your second haiku better today, even though your first made me smile broadly. I'm pretty certain I agree with your first, but I agree even more with your second -- where's the fun in being nice?

    Naughty or nice
    We can go to France
    If you're well-behaved. This year
    It's naughty or Nice.

    -------
    Santa's list is pure
    Discrimination. The A-
    CLU will sue!

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  3. Greg - ugh. Planning on working on that tonight. Hopefully will have something to post before bedtime.

    I like the idea of alternating months like that. But whatever ends up working for you is fine by me.

    Oh man. "It's naughty or Nice." That's inspired. Well done, sir. :)

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