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Tuesday April 3rd, 2018

The exercise:

Write two haiku about: repairs.

3 comments:

  1. Rush outside, who calls?
    A crumpled shape lies in rocks
    Leg bloody, twisted.

    Paramedics come
    Load her up, adventure is
    Done. Despair -- life over.

    Hope in hospital
    A listening ear, a new
    Place to live -- new friends.

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    escape

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  2. @morganna -- and in a rush of haiku your tale is over. I'm quite sad it's ended really, even though I knew it had to sometime.

    repairs
    "Make it better, please."
    "Eye repairs are tricky... I'm
    Not sure this will work."

    Depth perception's for
    Everybody else. You're not
    Dying -- be grateful!

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  3. Morganna - these three haiku make a fine ending for your epic haiku adventure. Well done!

    Greg - hah! That second haiku... just a pitch perfect conclusion to the first :)

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