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Tuesday April 14th, 2020

The exercise:

Write two haiku about: Iron Man.

2 comments:

  1. 73 years is a long time to wait for Easter Sunday and your birthday to coincide! But I suppose most of us don't even get that chance so perhaps it's not that important :)

    Iron Man
    Iron is heavy
    And rusts in the rain. Alu-
    -minium Man laughs.

    -------
    Caesium Man just
    explodes in the rain, but it
    did kill Dr. Doom.

    [Sadly there is a difference in spelling and pronunciation for aluminium/aluminum between English and American and only the English way works for this. Oddly the spelling is entirely the fault of aluminium's discoverer, who started off one way and then decided the other way was better.]

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  2. Greg - I did not know that it was the discoverer's fault, but now that I do... I'm pleased to know who to blame.

    I think I like your second best, but they're both equally good... and equally barely about Iron Man :P

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