Hmm, a haiku as an epitaph would certainly make for interesting reading in the graveyards. And I like your second haiku best today as it manages to tell quite the story in just seventeen syllables.
Epitaphs Fourteen tons of snow Surprised Dave -- briefly. Maybe God can thaw him out.
----- Here lies evil Sam, Laid in concrete and quicklime: May he never rise.
Hmm, a haiku as an epitaph would certainly make for interesting reading in the graveyards. And I like your second haiku best today as it manages to tell quite the story in just seventeen syllables.
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Fourteen tons of snow
Surprised Dave -- briefly. Maybe
God can thaw him out.
-----
Here lies evil Sam,
Laid in concrete and quicklime:
May he never rise.
Greg - I would definitely visit that graveyard. And thank you, glad you liked it.
ReplyDeleteHah, not sure I can choose between these two. That 'briefly' in the first might just win the day though...