tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post1514790557187975415..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Tuesday April 19th, 2016Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-81719336326691309482016-05-13T14:33:10.663-07:002016-05-13T14:33:10.663-07:00Morganna - your first haiku is lovely, and your se...Morganna - your first haiku is lovely, and your second is fiery and passionate and I cannot choose between the two. Nice work!<br /><br />Greg - yes, he definitely is very strong willed. Drives me crazy often, but I think in the end it will be a good thing.<br /><br />Hah, love your second one. I can just picture the scene and the confusion and the disbelief/anger confronting it... nicely done :)Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-72426052493689045072016-04-29T12:54:33.039-07:002016-04-29T12:54:33.039-07:00@Morganna: I think I like your second haiku better...@Morganna: I think I like your second haiku better today, because I suspect it's part of your Wedding suite of poems :)<br /><br />@Marc: Glad to hear that Miles is doing well! And amused that Max is being contrary again; he seems to enjoy doing that to you! I think he's trying to train you, you know...<br />It's a tough choice between haiku today, but I think, in the end, I'm going to pick your first for the idea of the maggots being gentle :)<br /><br /><b>Parting ways</b><br />It's just a hair-cut,<br />Autumn freshness. What's the deal<br />with my parting ways?<br /><br />---------<br />Of course it's the beach,<br />where else can we part the waves?<br />That's not what you said?<br />Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-74499845565474378742016-04-20T11:13:22.869-07:002016-04-20T11:13:22.869-07:00Goodbye, till we shall
Meet in our later years to...Goodbye, till we shall <br />Meet in our later years to <br />Dream of yesterdays.<br /><br />Good riddance to a <br />Bad bet -- don't dream of me -- I <br />Will always haunt you.morgannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04295309367485408358noreply@blogger.com