tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post1587251779587994430..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Tuesday July 20th, 2010Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-88838275327577326712010-07-21T16:44:56.689-07:002010-07-21T16:44:56.689-07:00Greg - hah, nicely done with that first one :)
Zh...Greg - hah, nicely done with that first one :)<br /><br />Zhongming - I really like your first one. Nicely done :)Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-64308872051206773102010-07-21T05:17:42.204-07:002010-07-21T05:17:42.204-07:00It should be scene instead of screen, my mistake :...It should be scene instead of screen, my mistake :)Zhongminghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03316151636704591892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-6051871565154162332010-07-21T05:15:57.157-07:002010-07-21T05:15:57.157-07:00I like both of yours. :)
Mine:
Writing beautiful...I like both of yours. :)<br /><br />Mine:<br /><br />Writing beautiful words<br />that fit together <br />just like jigsaw puzzle <br /><br />***<br /><br />watching it across the screen<br />and felt emotionally hurt<br />when she diesZhongminghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03316151636704591892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-54851765786525566162010-07-20T21:42:00.811-07:002010-07-20T21:42:00.811-07:0028 is still a little hot for me, and we got 29 yes...28 is still a little hot for me, and we got 29 yesterday here in London (sigh); we seem to be in for a summer for once. I may have melted by the end of August.<br />Here's hoping that the rain stays away from the wedding though!<br />I like your first haiku best, though the second is very evocative. I can quite picture the guitarist.<br /><br />The artist<br /><br />He paints his pictures,<br />Starving, in a cold attic.<br />His parents are rich.<br /><br />-----<br /><br />She mimes for money,<br />Scaring children and adults.<br />She feels so uncleanGreghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com