tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post1666467995886356081..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Sunday October 18th, 2009Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-15911597312811676702009-10-19T17:14:47.068-07:002009-10-19T17:14:47.068-07:00Well that last line of yours just takes things to ...Well that last line of yours just takes things to a whole new sinister level. I like it!<br /><br />Glad you enjoyed mine too :)Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-78149908060602190712009-10-18T23:42:19.834-07:002009-10-18T23:42:19.834-07:00Nice, you've really made this one work! I lik...Nice, you've really made this one work! I like the idea that the pigeons were keeping vigil for the murderer of their friend (and glad that London pigeons don't do that, or they'd be forever dive-bombing the traffic!).<br />Their revenge is nicely done too :)<br /><br />The Pigeon Vigil<br /><br />Dark shapes wheel across a lightening sky,<br />Birds taken flight<br />After taking fright,<br />But still retaining a symmetry,<br />A pattern focused at a common point,<br />Hyperbolic curves described in <br />Parabolic arcs.<br />They watch and wait, ten thousand<br />Beady eyes that will herald<br />The coming of the Pigeon King.Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com