tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post1795081205994747271..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Thursday August 18th, 2011Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-27277903283077927842011-08-30T23:01:47.709-07:002011-08-30T23:01:47.709-07:00Anon - absolutely beautiful. Great work.
Papple -...Anon - absolutely beautiful. Great work.<br /><br />Papple - great turnaround in your scene, and I really like your character's attitude.<br /><br />Greg - love the flow of your poem. And I had to smile at 'The water's off' :)Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-13539893738360914612011-08-19T23:53:00.708-07:002011-08-19T23:53:00.708-07:00Heh, I'd forgotten how much fun these prompts ...Heh, I'd forgotten how much fun these prompts can be! This song's a little more modern than your choice, perhaps, Marc!<br /> I like the ornamented bullets and the way you match the detail in your writing to the detail that she's painting. That little echo works wonderfully well!<br /><br /><a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pElbXYsZ9OU" rel="nofollow">Jealousy</a><br /><br />Poison drips into my ear<br />As though Shakespear<br />Is my director. An angry ghost<br />Lurks somewhere in the wings,<br />Breaking things,<br />Cursed with eternal jealousy.<br />Ophelia runs screaming by<br />Off once again to try<br />And drown herself. The water's off.<br />Envy whispers still to me in green,<br />I shall incarnadine<br />The world through jealousy.Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-74811524899694812932011-08-19T18:45:41.095-07:002011-08-19T18:45:41.095-07:00YEAH THATS COOL BSYEAH THATS COOL BSHermione Grangerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18403812777813708620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-14530531947448894932011-08-19T18:17:57.882-07:002011-08-19T18:17:57.882-07:00Thanks BSThanks BSAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-44963334397953218132011-08-19T17:35:12.979-07:002011-08-19T17:35:12.979-07:00that's cool papple XPthat's cool papple XPLeilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18355753728829179808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-44787327887517589202011-08-19T15:17:54.965-07:002011-08-19T15:17:54.965-07:00Hi Marc my song is Bulletproof
Bulletproof
The w...Hi Marc my song is Bulletproof<br /><br />Bulletproof<br /><br />The woman held her hand up to protect her face. A man was trying to kill her. He pulls the trigger to make the gun burst. BOOM! The bullet was shot. The woman was still standing after the bullet hit her. She looked at her hand. No blood, just a bullet. She took the bullet out of her hand and threw it on the ground,stepped on it and turned around. She yanked a tube of lipstick out of her handbag. She pushed the the lid down firmly. It clicked. It had transformed into a gun."Don't make me shoot!" she yelled. The man dropped the purse that he had nicked from her and ran. "Hmpph that'll teach 'em".Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-64335895430531773542011-08-19T06:39:01.407-07:002011-08-19T06:39:01.407-07:00Mine: The Hounds of Love by Kate Bush
Is love li...Mine: The Hounds of Love by Kate Bush <br /><br />Is love like the scent on a trail,<br />picked up and followed,<br />through the brambles, <br />through the fields,<br />rolling in the pungent glory,<br />of one another?<br /><br />And then to be lost in the babbling brook,<br />of change.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com