tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post1932967780778370121..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Tuesday May 14th, 2013Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-61591982474822749692013-05-17T00:54:43.580-07:002013-05-17T00:54:43.580-07:00Greg - organization, or a complete lack thereof :P...Greg - organization, or a complete lack thereof :P<br /><br />Jeez, both of yours are great. I really can't pick a favorite this week.<br /><br />Morganna - oh man, can I ever relate to your second one. Friggin' garden rocks.<br /><br />Mo - hah, great pair of haiku. I think I like your first a little bit better, but it is a close race.Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-25112123098371812832013-05-15T19:31:47.950-07:002013-05-15T19:31:47.950-07:00Good-bye, my dear friend
Margarita on the rocks
On...Good-bye, my dear friend<br />Margarita on the rocks<br />One last dance party.<br /><br />Rock out. Dance on bar. <br />Oh, God. I’m too old for this. <br />Drink some nice hot tea. <br />MosesMalonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03720946918202789617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-31434541857791554032013-05-15T06:19:47.093-07:002013-05-15T06:19:47.093-07:00Smooth and round, layered
In the earth, a river r...Smooth and round, layered <br />In the earth, a river ran <br />Through here long ago. <br /><br />Digging out the garden <br />Clang! reverberates through my <br />Arms -- another rock!morgannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04295309367485408358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-85465758949211690802013-05-15T01:09:32.842-07:002013-05-15T01:09:32.842-07:00You had your plant sale on the same day that your ...You had your plant sale on the same day that your intern started? That's organisation I can applaud :) And well done on getting all the strawberries sorted out already.<br />I think I like your first haiku better today, for all the subtle allusions going on in it.<br /><br /><b>Rocks</b><br />The mountain's patient<br />dissolution into sand<br />leaves small rocks behind.<br /><br />----------<br /><br />Grandma rocks her chair.<br />Stress'd wood soothes a baby's cries.<br />Day fades into night.<br />Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com