tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post2035441173039575757..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Tuesday December 27th, 2011Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-51510581754578694162011-12-31T00:00:18.053-08:002011-12-31T00:00:18.053-08:00Greg - hah, I can definitely relate to your second...Greg - hah, I can definitely relate to your second haiku :D<br /><br />Elor - bah, I'm sure you could have found a way to tie this prompt into your tale :P<br /><br />Enjoyed the contrast between your two poems. Kinda sums up the parenting paradox, I reckon.<br /><br />Writebite - totally agree with your second one. Think the world would be a lot happier.<br /><br />Intrepid Song - welcome to the blog, thanks for stopping by!<br /><br />Enjoyed both of your takes, the second one in particular for the great imagery.Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-67612702100191814962011-12-28T19:24:21.800-08:002011-12-28T19:24:21.800-08:00Welcome
Soft supple fresh touch
grasping to find ...Welcome<br /><br />Soft supple fresh touch<br />grasping to find and to know<br />what the world will give.<br /><br /><br /><br />The Mobile<br /> <br />Eyes of deep dark brown<br />stare curiously above<br />polka-dot animals spinIntrepid Songhttp://intrepidsong.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-91166749971869767092011-12-28T11:48:40.586-08:002011-12-28T11:48:40.586-08:00awww, a top topic, marc.
good entries, greg and cl...awww, a top topic, marc.<br />good entries, greg and cl.<br /><br />mine,<br /><br />Babies - haiku <br /><br />babies are the best<br />medicine for happiness<br />so I discovered<br /><br />their laughter enchants<br />their minds are eager to learn<br />we should be like themAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-43527342747757539082011-12-28T06:35:25.166-08:002011-12-28T06:35:25.166-08:00Well then guess my story is done for now Ha HA! Hm...Well then guess my story is done for now Ha HA! Hmm... babies. I actually agree with Greg. Don't get me wrong I love my kids, but yeah, the baby years are hard. My son can still be difficult at 4, but my daughter at 6 is mostly excellent (you can reason with her and she doesn't expect instant results). :}<br />Anyway two haiku about babies eh?<br /><br /><b>Babies</b><br /><br />Nine months have passed by<br />The baby eats, poops, and cries<br />When will she grow up?<br /><br />* * *<br /><br />Our daughter is grown<br />I remember long ago<br />I changed her diapersCathryn Leighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14816869021658935999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-79952801479981086092011-12-28T00:09:06.997-08:002011-12-28T00:09:06.997-08:00I like your first haiku better this week I think. ...I like your first haiku better this week I think. As for your second haiku: I recommend picking one up once its been house-trained and hold a conversation – much easier on your nerves :-P<br /><br /><b>Babies</b><br />They remade this film<br />With a cast of babies now?<br />The Thing seems too small.<br /><br />------<br /><br />I am feeling old<br />I swear they staff my Starbucks<br />With kids and babies....Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com