tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post2363381850114840641..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Saturday May 17th, 2014Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-2644914726356890122014-05-22T16:47:56.382-07:002014-05-22T16:47:56.382-07:00Greg - yeah, there are a dozen or fifty other thin...Greg - yeah, there are a dozen or fifty other things to distract him until we return :)<br /><br />Really liked that you incorporated the different labels into your poem. And I can't help but appreciate your rhyming of 'bazaar' with 'bizarre' :DMarchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-81650348720891368772014-05-18T01:06:37.914-07:002014-05-18T01:06:37.914-07:00Oh well, Max'll be back there soon enough when...Oh well, Max'll be back there soon enough when you start selling the strawberries! I'm sure he'll somehow manage to wait until then.<br />Great little poem, though I think the third and fourth lines are my favourite :)<br /><br /><b>The bazaar</b><br />I'm going to the market, well actually the souk,<br />But all who live here call it the bazaar.<br />In America it would be the shopping mall,<br />And frankly, I find that quite bizarre.<br /><br />Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com