tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post2682395306989441720..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Tuesday July 18th, 2017Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-56626221698646855802017-08-07T00:21:56.947-07:002017-08-07T00:21:56.947-07:00Greg - I think this was the day I got stuck at Cot...Greg - I think this was the day I got stuck at Cottonwood waiting for a plumber to install a new toilet in the ladies washroom. I had planned to get to a couple other locations during that time but was forced to abandon that and just get the basics done before I had to clean the office at the end of my shift. Not a big deal, more of an inconvenience.<br /><br />I like the take on the prompt in your first haiku and, being a parent, did not require any explanation of your second :) Tough to choose between the two... but that traffic jam in your first is too good not to be the winner this week.Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-36021673347184119322017-07-19T21:55:46.708-07:002017-07-19T21:55:46.708-07:00You're almost there with the comments :) Two ...You're almost there with the comments :) Two more days to go I think. And then you get a little longer to catch-up before the next instalment.<br />I'm curious as to how work didn't go according to plan now... :)<br />I like your first haiku better this week. The second one I've seen/heard happen too often (though not in Malta, where traffic jams can be caused by idiots just wanting to stop and talk to people for 15 minutes(!), but I think the first one is definitely the best solution.<br /><br /><b>The traffic jam</b><br />Pectin, sugar, an<br />Audi 500 make an<br />Unusual jam....<br /><br />Stuck, unmoving in<br />Eternal traffic. Hell is<br />Designed for parents.<br /><br /><br />[I think I might have tried to squeeze too much into that last haiku really: the image I have is of parents with small children, probably overtired (on all counts) stuck in an eternal traffic jam as punishment]<br /><br />Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com