tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post3195068721267526334..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Saturday November 21st, 2009Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-41856563351629045172009-11-23T21:41:23.450-08:002009-11-23T21:41:23.450-08:00Honestly? That was my second reaction to it. I jus...Honestly? That was my second reaction to it. I just couldn't remember it when I was typing my reply.<br /><br />And it's by no means a bad poem; I think the four line restriction was just very limiting this time around. A few more lines would have made it much more clear, I'm sure.Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-84709395413199521182009-11-22T21:15:28.039-08:002009-11-22T21:15:28.039-08:00Ah no, the intent is that the nobles are responsib...Ah no, the intent is that the nobles are responsible for the snow falling and freezing everyone. It's not clear though; it's not a good poem this time round.Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-25832340112280867092009-11-22T14:02:51.571-08:002009-11-22T14:02:51.571-08:00I seem to be incapable of writing all day. Five mi...I seem to be incapable of writing all day. Five minutes here, take a break, five minutes there, take a break. Oh well, it seems to be working.<br /><br />I quite like your poem, though I'm a touch confused by it as well. Surely they're not guilty that the peasants are freezing while they have warm fireplaces to come home to? That was my first thought, anyway.Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-80221593530714687022009-11-22T00:34:05.233-08:002009-11-22T00:34:05.233-08:00Well if you're writing all day you might just ...Well if you're writing all day you might just reach 50,000 ahead of all the rest of us. Good luck!<br /><br />Feeling guilty<br /><br />Snow has fallen for hours on the ground,<br />And all of the King's nobility<br />Are shivering and standing around<br />Looking and feeling guilty.Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com