tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post371319133997388809..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Tuesday January 4th, 2011Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-40711806999151351542011-01-05T22:57:52.510-08:002011-01-05T22:57:52.510-08:00Greg - that's also possible. But she generally...Greg - that's also possible. But she generally pretends that I'm funny.<br /><br />Your second haiku made me smile :)<br /><br />Vicki - two great haiku, I'm having trouble picking a favorite. Perhaps the first, since I've seen a storage room or two like that in my life.<br /><br />Morganna - 'A nice place for big projects' - indeed :)<br /><br />Zhongming - I'm so excited that the narrator is going back! Can't wait to see what happens next.<br /><br />Heather - haha, I remember that poem. That's pretty cool :)<br /><br />Sean - love what you did with the first haiku. Very nice.<br /><br />Summerfield - we will never appreciate a home the way we appreciate this one, that's for damn sure.<br /><br />Nicely done with both of your haiku :)Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-83001478401225002382011-01-05T18:33:55.283-08:002011-01-05T18:33:55.283-08:00marc, it's awesome what you had done with the ...marc, it's awesome what you had done with the house. i can see that every inch had been touched by love (corny and cliche, maybe, but it's true) and miraculously transformed to what it is now. pat yourself on the back. bravo.<br /><br />and i like everyone's haiku.<br /><br />btw, greg, this morning, i was quite late and when i got to the subway platform, there were two goth kids and immediately pestilence and famine came to mind because they were sitting on the floor just like you described in your post yesterday. whoa!<br /><br />-o0o- <br /><br />the storage room<br /><br /><br />mem'ries, old and sad<br />locked away perhaps for good<br />and not to be missed.<br /> <br />---<br /> <br />old knick-knacks galore<br />and the rest of my whole life<br />in a dark, cold room.summerfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15517091613960178381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-13989829796802222962011-01-05T16:37:19.681-08:002011-01-05T16:37:19.681-08:00I have many things
I am me because of them?
Many t...I have many things<br />I am me because of them?<br />Many things have me<br /><br />Old lives are there<br />the past is with us always<br />future is the pastSeanhttp://www.zenkrak.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-69892555923086991102011-01-05T15:47:35.217-08:002011-01-05T15:47:35.217-08:00Marc- The first line of your first haiku immediate...Marc- The first line of your first haiku immediately brought to mine a piece by Shel Silverstien: Sylvia Cynthia Stout Would Not Take The Garbage Out.<br /><br />Greg- Loved the second haiku. Some days it feels like that around here.<br /><br />Vicki- Loved the second one.<br /><br />Morgana- Well done. I especially liked your second verse.<br /><br /><br />Zhongming- Just had to steal some of Marc's precious space to tell you that your piece on OMW made me laugh. Also enjoyed your second haiku best.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06237138428325062807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-53151198795803899792011-01-05T14:03:34.455-08:002011-01-05T14:03:34.455-08:00Nice work, folks!
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The storage room
Numerou...Nice work, folks!<br /><br />---<br /><br />The storage room <br /><br />Numerous year of<br />Accumulating -<br />Knowledge expanding!<br /><br />It's never empty<br />For it's always filled with strong<br />Undying desire.<br /><br />---<br /><br />Comeback? (Continuation from the snowy woods)<br /><br />Memo of day ten, 8:46pm Friday, 29th Jan 2000.<br /><br />In the end, I made up my mind after talking to Winnie. I've once again decided to head back to the snowy woods where I found the letter which Ronnie wrote with his blood in search of the hidden path. <br /><br />So will I come back alive or suffer same fate as Ronnie?<br /><br />Stay tune for more action!Zhongminghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03316151636704591892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-32924977935798424762011-01-05T09:56:43.485-08:002011-01-05T09:56:43.485-08:00Filled with odds and ends
A nice place for big pro...Filled with odds and ends<br />A nice place for big projects<br />The storage room sits.<br /><br />Scrubbed clean and painted,<br />Filled with new furnishings, now<br />A little boy's haven.morgannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04295309367485408358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-1846843489576096662011-01-05T05:15:55.598-08:002011-01-05T05:15:55.598-08:00Didn't have time to write about bedrooms, but ...Didn't have time to write about bedrooms, but I did love the chess game! <br /><br />____<br /><br />Don't open the door!<br />Precariously balanced<br />boxes wait to fall.<br /><br />Forgotten mem'ries,<br />covered in dust and cobwebs,<br />want to be treasured.Vickinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-69106793398466448142011-01-04T23:56:53.772-08:002011-01-04T23:56:53.772-08:00Well I think Kat looks cute in that picture (and I...Well I think Kat looks cute in that picture (and I don't think she's making a face at you, I think you've just made a joke and she's letting you know it's not funny!), and you look... precarious in that last picture. The guest room does look miles better in the after pictures though.<br />I like your second haiku best, but only because the first one sounds too much like my own flat.<br /><br /><b>The storage room</b><br />Discontinued things<br />Waiting in the storage room<br />Hope for better homes.<br /><br />----<br /><br />Tuck the children in-<br />to the cupboards and closets.<br />There's no storage room.Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com