tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post3802708416702826766..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Tuesday August 11th, 2015Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-1608931753353531412015-09-01T11:29:40.621-07:002015-09-01T11:29:40.621-07:00Greg - it just clears out the paths between the ve...Greg - it just clears out the paths between the vegetables. They tend to get overgrown with weeds pretty quickly and it is much faster than doing it by hand or by hoe. Makes movement easier, as well as weeding around the actual vegetables a little more manageable.<br /><br />I am deeply intrigued by your second haiku. There is a story to be told there. Or two. Or three...<br /><br />Morganna - that's a lovely image your first poem presents this week. I like it a lot.<br /><br />Ivy - oof, two haiku with punch to them this week. I think I like your first best, but it's a tough call.Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-60115202165600355372015-08-12T14:08:11.186-07:002015-08-12T14:08:11.186-07:00These words you tell me
Are naught but deadly veno...These words you tell me<br />Are naught but deadly venom. <br />They kill me slowly.<br /><br />The smiles on my sleeves<br />Are a ruse crafted for you.<br />Take your punishment. <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-8038538706220453132015-08-12T06:19:40.964-07:002015-08-12T06:19:40.964-07:00Sunset light gleams on
Old neon, giving life to
...Sunset light gleams on <br />Old neon, giving life to <br />Signs one last moment. <br /><br />The dog seems friendly. <br />But only 'cause I'm on foot. <br />On a bike, watch out.morgannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04295309367485408358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-1829252768847951082015-08-12T04:03:33.455-07:002015-08-12T04:03:33.455-07:00What does rototilling the paths do? Because you c...What does rototilling the paths do? Because you call it a garden I immediately assume that a path is a set of (probably concrete) flags laid down to allow you access to the various parts of it, but when I remember that you're actually talking about fields, it occurs to me that you might just mean unplanted earth.<br />I definitely like your first haiku this week for making something oddly positive about a negative event :)<br /><br /><b>False</b><br />In Winter's embrace,<br />There is no cake. Only the<br />Laughter of the damn'd<br /><br />It shines like the sun<br />Enticing the gullible.<br />So many die here.<br /><br /><br />Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com