tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post3947207842608295883..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Saturday August 7th, 2010Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-894864005545358322010-08-10T06:45:20.471-07:002010-08-10T06:45:20.471-07:00Marc - Thanks! I'm glad you like it :)Marc - Thanks! I'm glad you like it :)Zhongminghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03316151636704591892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-76878224720934184922010-08-09T22:42:47.556-07:002010-08-09T22:42:47.556-07:00Zhongming - That's a powerful little poem, I l...Zhongming - That's a powerful little poem, I like it a lot :)Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-57961224263296493562010-08-08T23:49:15.067-07:002010-08-08T23:49:15.067-07:00Greg - Wonderful poem! That must be some sort of h...Greg - Wonderful poem! That must be some sort of heavy weight army i guess :)<br /><br />Marc - That is fantastic! Matched perfectly. Quite indulging though! Perfect tip for a spy/sniper :)<br /><br />The parade<br /><br />In front of the stand<br />As straight as you can<br />Not allowed to move an inch<br />Forward marching with disciplineZhongminghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03316151636704591892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-11416307834233770892010-08-08T23:35:20.880-07:002010-08-08T23:35:20.880-07:00Great, now I'm hungry too.
Kat's dad made...Great, now I'm hungry too.<br /><br />Kat's dad made a peach crisp for dessert last night, it was quite tasty :)<br /><br />Glad you liked mine, that was exactly the effect I was hoping for!<br /><br />Great imagery in yours, I particularly liked the third line.Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-42964414857919291412010-08-08T01:48:27.701-07:002010-08-08T01:48:27.701-07:00Mmmm, peaches! Nice as they are to eat fresh, the...Mmmm, peaches! Nice as they are to eat fresh, they're also great just lightly caramelised in a frying pan on the cut side, and served with freshly-made custard. Damnit, now I'm hungry!<br /><br />Fantastic poem this morning, Marc; the flow is so natural you can almost miss the last line, and then you find yourself re-reading it wondering why something didn't feel right!<br /><br />The parade<br /><br />They shamble down the street,<br />Heads hanging, clothes in tatters,<br />Chains as heavy as their defeat,<br />Put on them by their alien captors.Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com