tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post4095437525096903815..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Saturday May 31st, 2014Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-27691374151407935542014-06-06T00:22:53.484-07:002014-06-06T00:22:53.484-07:00Greg - hah, that's a fine guess!
Hmm, that al...Greg - hah, that's a fine guess!<br /><br />Hmm, that almost feels like the beginning of a story. A very interesting, full of many possibilities story.Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-13354013468509281042014-06-01T02:03:07.476-07:002014-06-01T02:03:07.476-07:00My guess now is that he wouldn't stay because ...My guess now is that he wouldn't stay because she wouldn't leave....<br />Sounds like Max is growing up in other ways as well then if he'll now go to sleep because it's bedtime, and not just because his parents are encouraging him to. He must be more aware of the things in his environment that protect him :)<br />That's a great little poem with a delightful sense of optimism and whimsy! Perfect for a Sunday (which it is here).<br /><br /><b>The man who wouldn't stay</b><br />I built for you an edifice<br />Of glass and steel and clay<br />And put your name upon the door...<br />But you're the man who wouldn't stay.<br />Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com