tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post415878610997272024..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Tuesday September 3rd, 2013Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-36717924591585787532013-09-09T00:44:15.704-07:002013-09-09T00:44:15.704-07:00Greg - I think your second haiku takes it for me t...Greg - I think your second haiku takes it for me this week, for that totally unexpected last line.<br /><br />Morganna - after reading your first haiku I can easily picture someone standing at the edge of an overgrown field, contemplating its contents. I like that image a lot.Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-34097034409832480802013-09-04T09:52:12.473-07:002013-09-04T09:52:12.473-07:00Tall grass over my
Head. I wonder what might be
...Tall grass over my <br />Head. I wonder what might be <br />Hiding in this field. <br /><br />The horse is gone. Now <br />Orchids, tiny trees return. <br />Field becomes forest.morgannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04295309367485408358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-82579434999365015262013-09-04T01:04:17.849-07:002013-09-04T01:04:17.849-07:00Well, I hope that it's your first haiku that h...Well, I hope that it's your first haiku that has the ring of truth to it today, and not the second! I definitely prefer your first haiku.<br /><br /><b>The field</b><br />They stand there forlorn,<br />glory's measured against them;<br />For they also ran.<br /><br />----------<br />Two cows graze in peace,<br />a falcon circles above.<br />They build here next week.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com