tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post4163132893763734936..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Saturday September 1st, 2012Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-90653060574130032102012-09-05T14:30:06.989-07:002012-09-05T14:30:06.989-07:00Greg - I think we do pretty well, though it's ...Greg - I think we do pretty well, though it's always hard to judge how other vendors are doing. The combination of fruit and veggies works well for us.<br /><br />Ah, I always suspected there was some poetry lurking within mathematics :)<br /><br />Cathryn - regardless of how long it has been, it's good to have you back :)<br /><br />Lovely little scene, I had no trouble picturing it.<br /><br />Aholiab - absolutely love the progression of your poem. Great stuff!<br /><br />Writebite - mmm, now you've got me longing for mine. Nice work.Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-30140004130156601732012-09-03T03:54:19.433-07:002012-09-03T03:54:19.433-07:00the kiss
wet and sloppy
moist on my cheek
baby&#...the kiss<br /><br />wet and sloppy<br />moist on my cheek<br />baby's first kiss<br />was my best treatAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-29438141890001274152012-09-02T19:35:30.285-07:002012-09-02T19:35:30.285-07:00The Kiss
Her eyes laughed at my joke
Her nose wri...<b>The Kiss</b><br /><br />Her eyes laughed at my joke<br />Her nose wrinkled at my gaze<br />Her hand trembled at my touch<br />But her lips melted at my kissAholiabhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06924390506677359767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-47202903909294774822012-09-02T06:22:45.611-07:002012-09-02T06:22:45.611-07:00Gosh I can't remember the last time I posted s...Gosh I can't remember the last time I posted something here... At least a week ago I suppose. *sigh* Ah well the crisis is slowly ending, though I wish it followed a plot structure, so the ending didn't drag on. Ah well, that's life for you.<br /><br /><br /><b>the kiss</b><br /><br />Sleeping figure, finally home,<br />Mother watches her breath.<br />Brushing hair, child's face revealed,<br />Mother gives her a kiss.Cathryn Leighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14816869021658935999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-11605458853601688302012-09-02T01:44:59.045-07:002012-09-02T01:44:59.045-07:00I'm pretty impressed with the sales you manage...I'm pretty impressed with the sales you manage at your farmer's market; it sounds like you must be one of the most successful stalls there!<br />That's a sweet little poem. I don't know if I can manage much today; after submitting my poem for the Poetry Tournament (about 50 lines in iambic tetrameter) I'm kind of poetted out :(<br /><br /><b>The kiss</b><br />Preparation<br />For osculation<br />Is trepidation<br />...then elation.<br /><br />[osculate means to kiss, from the Latin osculere. Mathematics has <i>osculating circles</i> which is surprisingly poetic for the subject!]Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com