tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post4522064319267637442..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Tuesday July 2nd, 2013Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-740150922314911082013-07-05T23:58:01.456-07:002013-07-05T23:58:01.456-07:00Greg - I'll gladly take a draw :)
Quite like ...Greg - I'll gladly take a draw :)<br /><br />Quite like the possibilities your first haiku inspired in my imagination.<br /><br />R.K. - welcome to the blog!<br /><br />That's an intriguing poem. Not my idea of refreshing, but I could see how it would be for someone else.<br /><br />I appreciate the new perspective, and I hope to see more from you here :)Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-42925420178834760262013-07-03T04:08:02.196-07:002013-07-03T04:08:02.196-07:00icy fish
laced with blood
spices smell
--R.K.Sing...icy fish<br />laced with blood<br />spices smell<br /><br />--R.K.Singh Ram Krishna Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06209043322615503496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-85014870216616392532013-07-03T00:19:42.990-07:002013-07-03T00:19:42.990-07:00That's definitely not a nice temperature to ha...That's definitely not a nice temperature to have to work in! If it's that hot in the shade then the best thing to do is as little as possible :)<br />I'm sure Max will be every bit as cute as you need him to be; failing that I'd go with making sure there are plenty of iced drinks and breezy, shady places for people to escape to.<br />I really like your first haiku today for its tart little sting; but I also really like the imagery in the second haiku. I'm going to declare it a draw!<br /><br /><b>Refreshing</b><br />Water's calm surface<br />Hides a deep refreshing chill.<br />The swimmer darts past.<br /><br />------------<br />Hot, tired eyes blink,<br />But the road never changes.<br />They need refreshment.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com