tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post4552848881310879451..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Friday August 7th, 2015Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-68350352740504912282015-08-31T11:41:36.728-07:002015-08-31T11:41:36.728-07:00Greg - thanks! I think that's the only line of...Greg - thanks! I think that's the only line of mine that I actually like in this one.<br /><br />Hah, now *that* is one heckuva image :D<br /><br />Ivy - a delightfully intimate moment, cheekily captured. Nice work :)Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-29037072022595500582015-08-08T19:27:49.937-07:002015-08-08T19:27:49.937-07:00I watched from the bed as she bent at an odd angle...I watched from the bed as she bent at an odd angle towards the mirror, her butt sticking deliciously outward. She took the—brush? Is that the word?—out of its holder and began to rub it against her eyelashes.<br />“You look so hot when you put your makeup on,” I muttered. <br />She smirked at me in the mirror but continued to lengthen her lashes, which wasn’t the only thing lengthening at the moment. <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-60296609770594427952015-08-08T00:51:56.106-07:002015-08-08T00:51:56.106-07:00I hope you benefit from the parade, though I have ...I hope you benefit from the parade, though I have a feeling that you've said that in previous years there are more people but fewer interested in buying things. Still, Max will probably enjoy the atmosphere of it all :)<br />I really like the line "your lashes slashing into my skin"; very evocative! <br /><br /><b>Eyelashes</b><br />"New mascara?"<br />"Er... yes! How could you tell?"<br />"You're using toothpicks to hold your eyelids up, Jeannie."<br />Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com