tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post4762923594955223670..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Tuesday April 12th, 2011Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-71391004021154155562011-04-14T00:12:45.362-07:002011-04-14T00:12:45.362-07:00Greg - really liked your first one this week.
Mor...Greg - really liked your first one this week.<br /><br />Morganna - I like that a lot. Bonus points for using both 'tussle' and 'squirm' in a haiku :)Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-28799382241621579352011-04-13T06:56:44.057-07:002011-04-13T06:56:44.057-07:00They argue and fight,
Tussle, squirm. Often at od...They argue and fight, <br />Tussle, squirm. Often at odds, <br />Rivals and brothers.morgannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04295309367485408358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-28649297869623664782011-04-13T03:47:08.645-07:002011-04-13T03:47:08.645-07:00It's that time of the year when you get to roo...It's that time of the year when you get to root for your team for the three weeks they're in the competition for? Yay!<br />I hope they do better this year too though :)<br />I like the punchline to your first haiku; I like the team-loyalty in your second.<br /><br /><b>The rivals</b><br />(Isn't that the name of a play by Sheridan, btw?)<br /><br />Like chalk and acid,<br />They get on explosively.<br />Best rivals since school.<br /><br />-----<br /><br />The wind shakes the tree,<br />And dislodges my rival.<br />I can't laugh harder!Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com