tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post5090997506071074118..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Wednesday August 10th, 2011Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-15167342612702132102011-08-12T20:14:29.539-07:002011-08-12T20:14:29.539-07:00Scribbles on an open range,
reminescent of my thou...Scribbles on an open range,<br />reminescent of my thoughts estranged,<br />attempting in vain not to desire this power,<br />to strike another man and drive him down like a tower.<br /><br />Tremendous momentum rides with the quarterback,<br />my mind draws upon the joys<br />of all my past sacks.<br />But I left football behind to continue my dream,<br />to open my emotions to the musical stream.<br /><br />There's no good metaphor to snagging a pass,<br />leaping over the corner and tearing the grass,<br />Even in practice I'll miss the drills repetitions,<br />football has always been in my definition.Deninhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14184430819173388170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-52185408202294496992011-08-12T13:50:17.194-07:002011-08-12T13:50:17.194-07:00Colourful, beautiful and realistic
Blue, purple an...Colourful, beautiful and realistic<br />Blue, purple and yellow<br />Though not even there, it was a beautiful... DrawingRubynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-9763012347284812332011-08-12T04:29:38.185-07:002011-08-12T04:29:38.185-07:00Well my best drawing is the one I made of medusa l...Well my best drawing is the one I made of medusa last yearWolfRider5/6https://www.blogger.com/profile/07032453064421626031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-91944947195832121942011-08-11T22:49:55.087-07:002011-08-11T22:49:55.087-07:00I like your new name asdfghjkl5/6I like your new name asdfghjkl5/6madness5/6https://www.blogger.com/profile/18134795980360634620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-28760444415721703892011-08-11T22:48:19.630-07:002011-08-11T22:48:19.630-07:00Drawings can be big
They can also be small
They...Drawings can be big <br /><br />They can also be small<br /><br />They can be scribble<br /><br />They can be portraits<br /><br />But all in all they're greatmadness5/6https://www.blogger.com/profile/18134795980360634620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-28378463967546653342011-08-11T15:28:41.174-07:002011-08-11T15:28:41.174-07:00the drawing
it has coulors and swirls but it'...the drawing<br /><br />it has coulors and swirls but it's not ment to have a picture but a mood it changes any time i look at it from happy to mad from sad to glad and that is why i like my drawing wich i hang on my door for everyone to see!!!<br /><br />this is a slightly abstract peice of writingavartorman5/6https://www.blogger.com/profile/09265434251075298820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-87253196344213226152011-08-11T14:33:15.171-07:002011-08-11T14:33:15.171-07:00The drawing is beautiful and it has got lots of co...The drawing is beautiful and it has got lots of colours. I bought it from my local shop and now it is hanging in my room. I can draw but deffanitly not as good as who ever drew this drawing.LittleBro 5/6https://www.blogger.com/profile/10903245044868923788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-58406188532891567552011-08-11T14:24:46.715-07:002011-08-11T14:24:46.715-07:00It was this massive painting on the wall of the mu...It was this massive painting on the wall of the museum of art, it was so big that it could fill up my bedroom. But the picture was just scribble, it had blotches of yellow and splotches of red, it turned out just to be a massive painting of scribble.Mad Man5/6!!!!!!noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-58612289432638322142011-08-11T10:34:51.007-07:002011-08-11T10:34:51.007-07:00Marc: Really liked that although I shuddered at th...Marc: Really liked that although I shuddered at the ending! Great imagery :)<br /><br />Greg: That was lovely! It took me somewhere else far away.<br /><br />Here's mine - a bit of free verse:<br /><br /><b>The Drawing</b><br /><br />Circles in the sand<br />beckon, notions of a faraway land,<br />elevations made out to be,<br />more than what the eye can see.<br /><br />A picture of perfection may it be,<br />dawn or dusk at sea,<br />a point where water meets sky - <br />drawn with a line in mind's eye.<br /><br />Canvases speak different languages,<br />casting away the bandages,<br />intonations in a heart riddled with drawings,<br />from life's many a sowing.Watermarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09950214409406244159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-70856160129786611472011-08-11T04:06:11.901-07:002011-08-11T04:06:11.901-07:00I changed my to asdfghjkl 5/6
(Isaac)I changed my to asdfghjkl 5/6 <br /><br />(Isaac)asdfghjkl 5/6noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-34229833341495046672011-08-11T01:34:52.078-07:002011-08-11T01:34:52.078-07:00The Drawing
We need to know what the clue is immed...The Drawing<br />We need to know what the clue is immediately! Bob said demandingly. Apparently this painting holds all the secrets of the world and all of the government’s vulnerable points."I don't know how one little painting can hold so many secrets". Bob said. The painting was 1 metre wide and 1.5 metres high. There had to be some way of finding the secret opening to get the secret papers. Bob and his team were clueless on what way to get it out. The brains of the team Alex, said, "The frame of the painting is made out of diamond plating moulded into this position". Suddenly the clumsy guts Clef tripped over a rock from their super secret hide out and knocked the picture of its wall. Thud! The picture fell on the floor making a thud. Suddenly, the wall started to creek and before they realized that the painting was even on the floor, the wall had turned around revealing a secret golden key. Bob picked up the key and slotted it in the man’s mouth of the painting and it clicked open a secret compartment. Finally they had all of the world’s secrets and now they could rule the world!<br />The EndMysteries Master 5/6https://www.blogger.com/profile/18302717681407364431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-48913039965518141322011-08-11T00:27:51.070-07:002011-08-11T00:27:51.070-07:00I'm really good,
I'd draw every day,
I rea...I'm really good,<br />I'd draw every day,<br />I really would if I could,<br />I'd rather draw than play,<br />I have my reasons,<br />I like to draw,<br />I draw diferent things in different seasons,<br />I can't draw on my door.<br />This was randomWolfRider5/6https://www.blogger.com/profile/07032453064421626031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-23569941862318175282011-08-11T00:25:24.693-07:002011-08-11T00:25:24.693-07:00Marc your one is scary... I like it.Marc your one is scary... I like it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-26783931899180417422011-08-11T00:21:42.825-07:002011-08-11T00:21:42.825-07:00I like to draw,
I really do,
I'm not that good...I like to draw,<br />I really do,<br />I'm not that good at it,<br />Are you?<br />Drawing makes you use your imagination it is fun and funny. Once I drew a weird picture of my dog sticking her tongue up her nose.<br /><br /><br />That last bit is true! ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-66202538791965472692011-08-11T00:06:37.889-07:002011-08-11T00:06:37.889-07:00I have no idea what you mean by "my style of ...I have no idea what you mean by "my style of writing", or how that piece could possibly be inspired by it! <br />*Ahem*<br />I do like the steady build-up of detail you put into the story though, and the tension grows nicely all the way through. The kids using both hands to draw with made me laugh as well.<br />And I'm very pleased to see someone taking good care of their pet dog :)<br /><br /><b>The drawing</b><br />April is the cruellest:<br />Month after month she draws the names,<br />Each written in India Ink on ivory plaques,<br />From a bag she stole in the Levant.<br />(An angry shopkeeper pursued her for miles,<br />A footrace between anti-heroes,<br />Where the prize smelled of wet horse<br />And was threadbare.)<br />The names that are drawn are called aloud,<br />And men's faces, already grey with anguish,<br />Fall further still. They stand reluctantly<br />And shuffle to the door where April stands<br />To usher them into the wastelands.Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com