tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post5165008299694265259..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Tuesday September 22nd, 2009Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-14027865096573283542009-09-24T05:36:04.080-07:002009-09-24T05:36:04.080-07:00Marc ... you don't understand Greg's first...Marc ... you don't understand Greg's first one because you live in BC. Spend one winter in an Ontario snow belt and you'll understand what he means.Monica Manninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15261586665831377609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-16592181746842578702009-09-23T22:42:14.898-07:002009-09-23T22:42:14.898-07:00Greg - I like the second one better too :)
"...Greg - I like the second one better too :)<br /><br />"Smile like you mean it" is a great finishing line for your second one. I have to confess I don't understand your first one though.<br /><br />Monica - thanks :)<br /><br />Oh my God, your first one just made me laugh out loud. It's perfect! Oh jeez, your second one is almost as good too. Brilliant!Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-52346491666721630132009-09-23T19:23:41.370-07:002009-09-23T19:23:41.370-07:00I hate the dentist too. Just thinking about it mak...I hate the dentist too. Just thinking about it makes me convulse. <br /><br />Marc: Loved both, especially the second one. I'm going to buy red sparkly shoes for my next visit.<br /><br />Greg: Excellent. I liked both of them equally. <br /><br />* * * <br /><br />both hands thrust in mouth<br />plus umpteen tools and gadgets— <br />and he wants to talk<br /><br /><br /><br />lecture on brushing, <br />finger-wag about fillings— <br />then hand out suckersMonica Manninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15261586665831377609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-50852797306557674632009-09-22T23:33:49.005-07:002009-09-22T23:33:49.005-07:00I'm no fan of the dentist either, but I'm ...I'm no fan of the dentist either, but I'm learning that every time I put it off, it just makes the next visit that much harder to make. <i>sigh</i> And I should probably book a check-up in the next couple of months too.<br /><br />Hehe, your haikus do a good job of reflecting the fear of the waiting room! I like the second one better myself.<br /><br />at the dentist's office<br /><br />Savage dentistry<br />When winter closes the roads;<br />Never smile again<br /><br />------<br /><br />You paid your dentist<br />Good money for teeth so white.<br />Smile like you mean itGreghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com