tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post6207756191571962097..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Saturday May 30th, 2015Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-91980282160089465282015-06-04T00:55:34.097-07:002015-06-04T00:55:34.097-07:00Greg - people go nuts for strawberries. And cherri...Greg - people go nuts for strawberries. And cherries. I can't say I blame them on either count!<br /><br />Okay, this sounds like a duo I'd like to hear more from. They sound like quite the pair!<br /><br />Ivy - oh, them some good strawberries all right :)<br /><br />There is a wonderful rhythm to your poem. I highly enjoy reading it aloud, especially the final two lines. Nicely done!Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-3942327392804147832015-05-31T17:49:46.732-07:002015-05-31T17:49:46.732-07:00I wish I had your luck. Selling all those strawber...I wish I had your luck. Selling all those strawberries in 45 minutes? Them must be some good strawberries. I'm glad Max is doing fine! Your poem is far too true. And these kind of truths are never good. But your poem is good. Well done!<br /><br />Greg, you again have such great characters. And even in a four line poem! Splendid!<br /><br />Supply and Demand:<br /><br />How much, you say, for what I have?<br />Far too much for a guy like you to own.<br />My skin is ivory, my insides gold,<br />So run along, boy. Go right on home.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-73412029327012351592015-05-31T06:30:12.259-07:002015-05-31T06:30:12.259-07:00Wow, I was expecting you to say that they sold fas...Wow, I was expecting you to say that they sold fast, but that's incredibly fast! People must have been really missing fresh, tasty strawberries! And I get the other vendors are glad that they get first pick, since they got all the raspberries :) Congratulations, it sounds like a great start to the market season.<br />Heh, that's a great little poem too, short and pithy, the kind of thing you could put on a sign and hang up behind your stall ;-)<br /><br /><b>Supply and Demand</b><br />She was limber and lithe and incredible supple,<br />And he was damn fast with his hands,<br />So they teamed up and fought against goodness and right<br />And called themselves Supply and Demand.<br /><br />Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com