tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post6832036392720724587..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Friday May 16th, 2014Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-7646906303109410272014-05-22T16:44:09.224-07:002014-05-22T16:44:09.224-07:00Greg - hah, sorry to disappoint :P
I am very much...Greg - hah, sorry to disappoint :P<br /><br />I am very much looking forward to having time to plot once again...<br /><br />Fantastic atmosphere in your piece. I feel like many a tale could begin in such a place.Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-8572617503580329872014-05-17T01:27:06.927-07:002014-05-17T01:27:06.927-07:00I was so sure sure when I was reading "oil an...I was so sure sure when I was reading "oil and filter change" that you were going to finish with "on the tractor". Oh well :(<br />Don't worry, you'll get through the next couple of weeks just fine; you managed all the ones previous to this! And then you'll get help and you'll be planning how to take over the world again :)<br />Hmm, interesting scene you have there! I like how it finishes; just ready to really start!<br /><br /><b>The diner</b><br />Dalton's was filled with the usual crowd; all of us who gathered here when the connected world disconnected and left us internetless and alone. We fled the Downtime and ended up here, in the Diner, gathered around the stammtisch (it looked ancient but it was from IKEA) and exchanging stories about the days before global connectivity. Lars and Helen were playing backgammon and several people were looking on; the betting was just starting to get serious. And here was Dalton himself, his eyes twinkling as he brought over the plates of chili-battered chicken feet, stuffed aubergines and baked halloumi; a sure sign that Blind Alex had been ordering at random off the menu again.<br />Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com