tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post8251825530391619103..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Tuesday September 5th, 2017Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-72662500136854697612017-09-11T01:26:49.276-07:002017-09-11T01:26:49.276-07:00Greg - yes, I haven't been within a week of ca...Greg - yes, I haven't been within a week of catching up in... a very, very long time.<br /><br />They were there at my last appointment, and one of them will be treating me at my next (while my soon to be former chiropractor there to supervise). So that's pretty ideal.<br /><br />Nice acrostic, and the two haiku flow together very nicely. Impressed as well that you managed such a poignant tale while conforming to both the haiku format and the acrostic. Well done, sir!Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-3912728916028702832017-09-06T23:46:45.441-07:002017-09-06T23:46:45.441-07:00I think you're more caught up on the comments ...I think you're more caught up on the comments than you have been in a few months, so you're doing well! You're even ahead of the Dream Kingdom prompt so you can pick that up whenever you're ready :)<br />Will you meet these new chiropractors before you end up (literally) in their hands?<br />I think I like your first haiku slightly better today though it's a tough choice. I really like the image the first one conjures, but the second one makes me laugh since I bought a rolling-pin (here in Kiev) recently as it was just a little rough in places and I did pull a splinter off it before I started using it.<br /><br /><b>Slivers</b><br />Slivers of despair<br />Hurled at lonely souls break them<br />Apart in splinters<br /><br />Recovery is<br />Dreadfully slow. Spring becomes<br />Summer... two years on.<br />Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com