tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post8505482996006564239..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Tuesday August 16th, 2011Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-38761352358289879492011-08-30T22:52:55.742-07:002011-08-30T22:52:55.742-07:00Brittany - two lovely haiku, I'm unable to pic...Brittany - two lovely haiku, I'm unable to pick a favorite.<br /><br />Greg - I'm not sure I'd go back to the florist in your first haiku. Not unless I wanted to send flowers to someone I really disliked :P<br /><br />Ruby - sometimes things are worth the extra cost, other times not so much; sounds like your second poem falls into the 'not so much' category.Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-36438082614487561422011-08-17T03:11:28.167-07:002011-08-17T03:11:28.167-07:00brittany P- i love your last 3 lines
greg-your hai...brittany P- i love your last 3 lines<br />greg-your haiku is great i love your last 3 lins as wellrenni4noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-50531216685891373592011-08-17T03:00:57.263-07:002011-08-17T03:00:57.263-07:00Florist
Loves her flowers and never lets them go...Florist <br /><br />Loves her flowers and never lets them go<br />Green, red, blue or pink, she doesn't care, has to have them all<br /><br /># # # #<br /><br />I never go to her shop because her <br />flowers are too expensive <br />Guess she needs the money alhtough her shop is a hit but not to meRubynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-81362090204828461012011-08-17T01:27:48.233-07:002011-08-17T01:27:48.233-07:00The florist
Six long-dead roses,
With extra thorns...<b>The florist</b><br />Six long-dead roses,<br />With extra thorns and greenfly.<br />The florist hates me.<br /><br />------<br /><br />Her flowers still bloom<br />In the middle of winter<br />To make people smile.Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-6356485117325114462011-08-16T23:55:52.828-07:002011-08-16T23:55:52.828-07:00A ringing bell, a
smiling face, a delicate
flower ...A ringing bell, a<br />smiling face, a delicate<br />flower in a vase<br /><br />---<br />Roses, irises,<br />bleeding hearts and sweet jasmine;<br />smelling of summershadowprancerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10370175641666853502noreply@blogger.com