tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post8636033914456181838..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Saturday April 18th, 2009Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-71955829470803350442009-04-19T22:43:00.000-07:002009-04-19T22:43:00.000-07:00Broody? Ha. Not quite yet.
Yeah, I tend to force ...Broody? Ha. Not quite yet.<br /><br />Yeah, I tend to force myself into corners with my poetry, the picture one being one I couldn't find a good way out of. Ah well.<br /><br />Cherry Blossom ice cream sounds awesome though.Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-9711846082060478222009-04-19T03:42:00.000-07:002009-04-19T03:42:00.000-07:00That's a very sweet little poem! Feeling broody? ...That's a very sweet little poem! Feeling broody? ;-)<br /><br />In a belated response to a comment from a few days ago about your poem, I couldn't think of a better last line either; the poem's constraints are quite tight I think.<br /><br />Cherry Blossoms<br /><br />Tulip sorbet is grey and poisonous,<br />Lavender tea helps me dream,<br />Hawthorn salad is best when it's partnered<br />With Cherry Blosson ice cream.Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com