tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post8734440972309943500..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Saturday October 17th, 2015Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-9094264203724012512015-10-19T00:18:06.219-07:002015-10-19T00:18:06.219-07:00Greg - well, I hope that's what is going on. W...Greg - well, I hope that's what is going on. We shall see...<br /><br />Oh man, at the end of the last chapter is terribly cruel. Hahaha... and now I'm tempted.<br /><br />Two poems for the price of one prompt? You're being too kind to me. That final line in your second is... spectacular. Well done, sir.Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-15743313679197890122015-10-17T23:54:59.750-07:002015-10-17T23:54:59.750-07:00Sounds like the Blue Jays just need a little time ...Sounds like the Blue Jays just need a little time to get the measure of the teams they're up against before they start dominating :)<br />If you shave whenever you catch up with comments you can make it feel like just one task instead of two!<br />That's a neat little poem, I could see that at the end of a chapter in a children's book. Perhaps the last one, if you were feeling mean ;-)<br /><br /><b>The next chapter</b><br />They went for the day to Jurassic Park<br />And took pictures of velociraptors.<br />But then they got stuck as the evening turned dark<br />For excitement, read the next chapters!<br /><br />However, I have an alternative offering if the above seems banal:<br /><br /><b>The next chapter</b><br />She'd been out all day in the cold north winds<br />Her skin red raw where she'd not wrapped her<br />Face with the scarf her friends had bought her.<br />She took no heed, and so the next chapped her.<br />Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com