tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post8780801908583415139..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Friday December 20th, 2013Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-77946567721110974172013-12-31T11:05:55.371-08:002013-12-31T11:05:55.371-08:00Greg - ah, I was hoping/figuring that you would kn...Greg - ah, I was hoping/figuring that you would know! That's all right, I can look it up myself at some point.<br /><br />Some great details packed into four lines, with the ending leaving me anxious to read the next installment. Nicely done!Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-23015848274032112442013-12-20T23:59:24.917-08:002013-12-20T23:59:24.917-08:00Well done on getting out to Calgary with Max! I h...Well done on getting out to Calgary with Max! I hope your white Christmas is every bit as enjoyable as can be :)<br />I have no idea if deserts get tornadoes either, but it looks to me as though the arrival of Santa Claus will end that train of thought without a resolution! Great little piece, with some neat tension.<br /><br /><b>Mine</b><br /><i>I really can't stay</i> thought Uruk, as he finally noticed the snow behind him. He looked at the floor of the hall, the deep grooves across the length of it, and wondered what on earth could have caused it, but decided that the hall looked quiet enough. Even so, he sidled into the space and kept to the walls as he quickly and quietly edged his way around. He was at the last wall when he heard the sound of breathing approaching.Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com