tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post8832666680871324063..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Saturday April 30th, 2011Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-63060853549560221402011-05-08T00:34:35.819-07:002011-05-08T00:34:35.819-07:00Thanks Marc :)Thanks Marc :)adminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02635942944394964430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-64108385225575693812011-05-02T00:06:29.914-07:002011-05-02T00:06:29.914-07:00Greg - a front loader is a fine birthday idea. I s...Greg - a front loader is a fine birthday idea. I shall pass that on to Kat :)<br /><br />Nicely done with the alternative definition of a trap. I'm intrigued by your narrator, I must admit.<br /><br />Mystic - you've got a wonderful rhythm to your poem! I could read it over and over :)<br /><br />Welcome to the blog, by the way. I hope to see more of your writing here!Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-27815534363762735122011-05-01T16:28:43.132-07:002011-05-01T16:28:43.132-07:00The walls are narrowing
Still, you waltz inside
B...The walls are narrowing<br />Still, you waltz inside <br />Bells and whistles dance for you<br />Until you love the lieadminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02635942944394964430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-59116634554043264062011-05-01T00:35:42.549-07:002011-05-01T00:35:42.549-07:00Wow, that's a lot of soil! I guess you'll...Wow, that's a lot of soil! I guess you'll be asking Kat for a front-loader for your birthday this year then? ;-) Since it sounds like you've got to make a second trip to fill the smaller box still....<br />I love the little poem today, it brought a smile to my face.<br /><br /><b>the trap</b><br />A light two-wheeled carriage with springs,<br />Carries me about each and every day,<br />In there I have interesting things,<br />To make sure that I get my way.Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com