tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post956461647589248598..comments2023-12-06T00:48:23.734-08:00Comments on Daily Writing Practice: Thursday May 20th, 2010Marchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-82408671225815231732010-05-24T20:07:26.434-07:002010-05-24T20:07:26.434-07:00Don't worry, I'm unimpressed every time I&...Don't worry, I'm unimpressed every time I'm unlucky enough to go in one too :)<br /><br />Those last four lines totally make your poem. Love 'em.Marchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14952331166517430843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1149217012399643733.post-27458749514598577582010-05-21T13:31:54.489-07:002010-05-21T13:31:54.489-07:00Ah, I encountered my first 7-11 in Canada this tri...Ah, I encountered my first 7-11 in Canada this trip! I was... unimpressed, but then perhaps I'd gotten the wrong idea from popular culture :)<br /><br />I like your poem, especially the last line.<br /><br />The corner store<br /><br />No soup, no shoes,<br />No bread, no tinned peas,<br />No mops, no candles; no matches, no cheese,<br />"Not today, please!"<br />I don't know what it sells,<br />And I don't want what it might,<br />But I love going in and asking for things,<br />Morning, noon, and night.Greghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08503319830584828982noreply@blogger.com