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Monday January 14th, 2013

The exercise:

Write about: the quarantine.

Doctor's appointment went great this morning, as Max was his usual smiling, charming self. Everything looked good, and the little man is now up to a rather impressive 13 pounds.

The NHL returns to action this Saturday and the Canucks are set to open their abbreviated season that night. Fingers crossed that it will be one worth waiting for.

Mine:

One little cough
Was all it took.
Now I'm locked up
Like a common crook -
They just had to
Do it by the book.

But I'm not sick,
Soon they will see
They've made a mistake
In confining me -
A common error
In times like these.

Why the delay,
Why can't I go?
Surely someone
Around here must know!
Cause I'm bleeding from
My eyes, ears, and nose?

3 comments:

  1. Glad to hear all is well with you, Kat and Max! And good luck for the game at the weekend! Sorry this is brief, but it's turning out to be a busy day.

    Quarantine

    Queasy,
    Uneasy,
    Arraigned in this cage –
    Rage! Rage
    Against the doctor's words, the
    Nurses cares, the communion of
    The tortured soul.
    I know its role.
    No ending while the bars are whole...
    Evacuate the town.

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  2. He, he. My take on quarantine, is a bit different, given I work in a manufacturing environment, where we use it for product as opposed to people.


    Quarantine

    Quarantine’s the place where the product goes
    Rejected or released, no one yet knows
    Not till the testing’s done and the review is complete
    The paper work is tidied up and made nice and neat

    Then down upon the record with authoritative hand
    The stamp of approval or rejection will land
    Quality Assurance has spoken and labels provided
    And by the disposition the product is divided.

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  3. Greg - do you ever have non-busy days?

    Fantastic acrostic, which I was not expecting with this prompt. Great pacing and rhythm!

    Cathryn - great alternative take on the prompt. Reminds me a little bit of my days in QA as a video game tester :)

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