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Tuesday February 13th, 2018

The exercise:

Write two haiku about: elephants.

4 comments:

  1. Yesterday I realised that Russian sometimes just changes the case the words are in instead of applying a preposition, which explains some occasional confusion I've had about trying to find the right preposition to express something. (The other problem is that Russian, more than any other language I've learned, is as bad as English about which preposition to use. Trying to work out "for" requires me usually to run through 5 options.)

    Elephants
    Skiing elephants
    Have brightened the Olympics...
    They go curling next!

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    Broken ivory
    Lines the graveyard's path. Tears flow
    Down wrinkled grey trunks.

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  2. greg: crying over the second one

    Elephants 2 haiku

    baby stuck in chains
    circuses of old did wrong,
    inhumanity

    their memories of
    generations, elephants
    teach us history

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  3. Loving, grey, and kind
    Living in family groups
    Lolling across the grass

    Lurking danger looms
    Lions, humans, fire, and storm
    Life is not easy.

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  4. Greg - me and my fragments of French and German over here are just going to be impressed with your Russian, at whatever level you end up being.

    Oof, that second one packs a punch, particularly after the light setup of the first. Nicely done.

    Dragonfly - your second one is really beautiful, I like the sentiment and how well you conveyed it.

    Morganna - llllllovely work :)

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