The exercise:
Write a four line poem about: innocence.
Last Saturday of June already, huh? Guess we're at the halfway point now.
Mine:
Clyde was innocent - relatively speaking -
While Charlie was the true threat.
Would he seek vengeance with his usual zest?
Well, that was a real safe bet.
Ah, so we have named brothers now, which just seems like they're (well one of them at least) is going to get involved. Which can't be good: a murderous brother and a homicidal robots and the Master hiding out with two more robots... this promises to get exciting!
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The ship withdraws from this forsaken isle
Where innocence was slain and then denial
Was brought to hide these deeds. The robot comes,
The Shadow shudders; Fate begins to smile.
And thus ends Part II. Part III gets to start in July :)
Greg - indeed. Still no actual plan, but the possibility of a coherent ending seems to be coalescing.
ReplyDeleteAh, look at that. Our Parts II and III aren't too far off from each other.
Really enjoyed the first two and a half lines, but the whole thing is pretty great.