Well, it's time to start part III, and see if Red's out of the hospital yet. Or at least out of bed!
Advancing The machines breathe for him; Air hisses through tubes that snake about like knotweed. Red pauses by the door, looks inside. “That was me,” he says. “Time’s advancing,” says Emma. “Look in a mirror instead.”
Well, it's time to start part III, and see if Red's out of the hospital yet. Or at least out of bed!
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The machines breathe for him;
Air hisses through tubes that snake about like knotweed.
Red pauses by the door, looks inside. “That was me,” he says.
“Time’s advancing,” says Emma. “Look in a mirror instead.”
Greg - I like the way you handled this transition. That simple 'Time's advancing' is delightfully well done.
ReplyDeleteAlso: woop, woop, Red is up!