Daily writing prompts from June 9th, 2008 to December 31st, 2022
The exercise:
Write two haiku about a: vice.
I read the prompt as "avarice" at first, and wondered where that had come from... :-DViceHer grip's like a viceOn his life making him thinkOf ways to escape.But is she to blame?Once he was mired in viceYet now he is saved.
Greg - hah :)Hoo boy? That seems like an appropriate reaction to these two haiku. The first one is really good on its own, but the second shines in its connection to the first.
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I read the prompt as "avarice" at first, and wondered where that had come from... :-D
ReplyDeleteVice
Her grip's like a vice
On his life making him think
Of ways to escape.
But is she to blame?
Once he was mired in vice
Yet now he is saved.
Greg - hah :)
ReplyDeleteHoo boy? That seems like an appropriate reaction to these two haiku. The first one is really good on its own, but the second shines in its connection to the first.