Greg - well, depending on one's take on 'stars', it might be all right.
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Anyway!
Woo, that final line provides a heckuva kick. Nicely done. Also enjoyed the rest of it, obviously, but that last line really brought things to a conclusion with a proper bang.
Hopefully this isn't connected with yesterday's prompt, as the stars falling would be worrying. Well, a little, anyway :)
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Falling, always falling,
Asleep, or down,
Or just forever.
It wasn't always like this.
Until the stars came right
we only fell through space
on the surface of our planet.
Falling...
sideways, across,
back-to-front and upside-down.
And sometimes screaming.
Greg - well, depending on one's take on 'stars', it might be all right.
ReplyDelete...
Anyway!
Woo, that final line provides a heckuva kick. Nicely done. Also enjoyed the rest of it, obviously, but that last line really brought things to a conclusion with a proper bang.