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Wednesday July 6th, 2022

The exercise:

Write about: a drawing.

2 comments:

  1. Apparently it's been 11 years (almost; there's about a month's difference) since you last used 'drawing' as a prompt. And, looking back at your tale of Miss Darnwell I still approve of her looking after her pet rottweiler as well as she does :)

    Drawing
    Walls tower overhead
    And we who stand in their shadows,
    Drawn here by tales from dead
    Men wonder if anyone anymore knows
    What the walls are made of.

    The walls draw in sunlight all day
    And at night radiate heat
    And we are drawn to them. We say
    It is better to acknowledge defeat
    And dwell in the shadows than to freeze.

    Some leave, pale and etiolated.
    They have surrendered to their fears of the dark.
    Some fade into nothingness, predated
    Upon by soldiers who perceive the mark
    Of Cain, written in scars on their skin.

    Campfires dot the darkness here and there,
    Strangers who approach are turned away.
    Everyone knows you must be aware
    Of the soldiers who don't exist by day
    Who were drawn to haunt these walls.

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  2. Greg - hah, I'd quite forgotten about that one. Thanks for the reminder!

    Very eerie. Beautifully done. Not on my top ten list of places to visit.

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