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Monday October 13th, 2008

The exercise:

Back safe and sound from the Okanagan, had a really great time there. The drive back was a bit of an adventure though, so today's starter is: road trip.

Mine:

Rain flooding the highway
Feel like I'll fly away
Passing cars spray gray mist
I am lost in their midst

A sports car in the ditch?
Well isn't that just rich.
Maybe we should slow down
Before our engines drown

2 comments:

  1. That road...
    yellow-lined...
    speed-signed...
    goad...

    That road...
    concrete paved...
    time-saved...
    bode...

    road...
    car-filled...
    oil-spilled...
    node...

    rode...
    life past...
    money-fast...
    heart-stowed...

    we rode...
    rain-kissed...
    sun-blissed...
    wind-blowed.

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  2. Really, really like the repetition and the slight changes in each stanza. Thanks for sharing.

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