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Sunday November 23rd, 2008

The exercise:

The Sunday starter this week is: lost in the mist.

Mine:

Going for this walk was a bad choice. I can hear someone calling from beyond this wall of gray but I can't find the voice. I should have stayed home tonight, I should have listened to Joyce.

Every direction I look it's all the same: gray picture in a gray frame. In my heart terror is fighting with shame. I think I might die out here but I know that I will shoulder all the blame. Leave me to this please, this is all my fault; I wish they would stop calling my name.

My footsteps are so heavy and slow. I stand still because I don't know which way to go. I look up to the sky to pray but instead see the first flake of snow. I am captivated by this final falling show.

3 comments:

  1. all the colours
    stirring at my feet:
    rain-washed dreams
    of gutter street

    falling through
    concrete cracks
    and metal grates
    thoughts thoughts thoughts
    carry beauty beneath



    having writer's block...

    i like yours.

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  2. That's interesting - this prompt was inspired by a writer on Protagonize who is suffering from a severe block.

    The only way I know how to get through the wall is to start writing and not allow myself to stop, no matter how crap it is.

    It's rarely pretty, but it usually works.

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  3. It was the first cool morning in a while. I looked outside and then eagerly began to pull on a jacket before rushing out the door.

    I loved the way the mist obscured everything around me. The trees and building were hazy making the familiar street suddenly seem mysterious. I breathed in the freshness of the air, reveling as it traced its way into my lungs.

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    That's all I could come up with. Not really having to do with being lost. :P

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