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Saturday January 10th, 2009

The exercise:

The topic for this Saturday's four line poem is: relaxing.

Mine:

With one long breath,
Set your stress free;
With one short sigh,
Stop and just be.
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5 comments:

  1. Laura Jayne11 January 2009 at 07:05

    Still in bed
    at 11:27 in the morning
    relaxing
    or just lazy?

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  2. Greg11 January 2009 at 12:25

    Nice little stanza! May I offer as my four line poem on relaxing:

    When I relax I only anneal,
    Made brittle by what shall pass.
    As shiny as brass, as brittle as glass,
    From peace to the strength of steel.

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  3. Anonymous11 January 2009 at 16:38

    My body sinks down on the couch
    My mind becomes clearer as the thoughts slow down
    All the negative energy searches for an exit
    There it is, a long, deep sigh

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  4. Marc11 January 2009 at 18:38

    @Laura Jayne: relaxing. Definitely relaxing. :)

    @Greg: heya, thanks for stopping by! I like the rhythm of your poem... and I'm not too proud to admit that I had to look up anneal.

    @Bunny: a wonderful expression of the true power of sighs. Thanks for the poem!

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  5. Greg13 January 2009 at 10:41

    Heya Marc,
    I've been stopping by for a while, lurking in the undergrowth :) I thought it might be time to admit that I'm here though.

    g

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