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Saturday March 14th, 2009

The exercise:

The topic for this week's four line poem is: afternoon nap.

What?

Mine:

Eyelashes embrace;
My room is replaced
By far off spaces
And forgotten faces.

3 comments:

  1. Sweet Afternoon Slumber

    All tasks are half done,
    Too many errands to run,
    Soft couch calls to wrap,
    all my tension in a nap.

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  2. Heya Marc, like the new blog layout, even if it does keep making me think of chocolate. Do you have a sweet tooth then?

    Afternoon nap:

    It shouldn't make a difference,
    Whatever the time of day,
    But the nap of the rug in the morning,
    And the afternoon goes opposite ways.

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  3. Septembermom - sounds to me like you've earned that nap :)

    Greg - good to have you back. Though I do love me some chocolate, red happens to be my favorite color and I just thought the brown went well with it.

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