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Saturday September 26th, 2009

The exercise:

Your Four Line Poem topic this week is: elegance.

I took this picture in Osoyoos last weekend:


Kat's mom sure knows how to set a classy table.

Mine:

No one has a word to say
While the violins do play
And they glide across the floor
On two legs instead of four

4 comments:

  1. Rose petals unfurling
    In the gleam of candlelight --
    Scents and intents both swirling,
    Heady, in the promise of tonight.

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  2. That is a nicely set table in your picture, it looks very inviting. The flower adds a perfect splash of colour to the otherwise clean white.

    As for your poem, I like it, I can hear the waltz playing in the background as I read it.

    Elegance

    Laid on my pillow by invisible hands,
    A flower as rare as love at first sight.
    Air filled with incense from far-away lands,
    And you, dressed in nothing but light.

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  3. Ana/Annie/Hey, it's you! - that was lovely! Thanks for dropping by :)

    Greg - oooh la la.

    ... yeah, that's all I have to say about that.

    :)

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  4. Yeah, I like to change my name from time to time. Keeps 'em guessing. ;)

    And wow, Greg, that was awesome! Especially that last line... wow.

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