The exercise:
Let us welcome the last month of the year with some haiku. Your Two Haiku Tuesday prompt this week: a complete 180.
Mine:
I thought you'd chosen,
I thought it was set in stone.
But stone turned to sand.
* * *
You said goodbye and
Headed for the door but a
Gun shot brought you back.
2 comments:
I love your first haiku with the idea of the stone turning to sand. The second one is also good, but puts me in mind of C&W music....
Does today's title have anything to do with yesterday's, by any chance?
A complete 180
You turned round so fast
You left your face behind you
I think it suits you
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Turn again my friend,
Going back is wrong for you
Face your future well
C&W music? Really? Get your head out of the Old West :P
And yeah, the two were definitely related.
Your first one is definitely my favorite :)
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