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Saturday April 3rd, 2010

The exercise:

Your four line poem topic this week: the garden.

Mine:

To plant a garden
Sow your seedy treasure
Then pray for sun and rain
In equal measure.

3 comments:

  1. Heh, you're starting to sound like you've ambitions to become a farmer! I'll be late posting for Monday, as I'll be flying to Toronto and then onto Moncton, but I'm sure I'll get there in the end! Hope you've had a good time up in Osyoos!

    The garden

    The spider-rose, an ancient evil,
    Grows only in the bone garden,
    The skeletal gardener stalks the rows,
    Denying intruders pardon.

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  2. A weed is not a gardening disgrace,
    It’s just living in an inconvenient place.
    A rose would earn scorn in a paddock of corn
    But still smell of old ladies and lace.

    ---

    I don’t see the need to work hard in
    the democratic jungle, my garden.
    Planted seedlings and self-made weedlings
    Are all due my equal regardin’.

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  3. Greg - yeah, almost :P

    I hope you had a safe trip back to Canada and that the weather has warmed up at least a little at that end of things.

    That's an excellent little poem of yours, by the way. I love the scene it painted in my head.

    Cosmo - two for the price of one! Excellent :)

    The first is a thought that's occurred to me, in some form or another, a few times in the last couple of years. I think you expressed it perfectly.

    The third line in your second poem is definitely my favorite. Thanks for dropping by, it's always a pleasure when you do.

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