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Tuesday December 6th, 2011

The exercise:

Two haiku about: the hypnotist.

Feeling maybe slightly better today. Perhaps.

Mine:

Please don't tell me that
I am getting sleepy while
I'm trying to drive

*     *     *

I find it rather
suspicious that he never
gets speeding tickets

3 comments:

  1. Your colds always seem to knock you out for a couple of days!
    I like your second haiku better today, just because I think the world would be a more interesting place if it were true. There's a story waiting to be told there.

    The hypnotist
    "Trust me," he told me,
    "I'm a hypnotist." He's gone,
    And I've no clothes on!

    ------------

    Our King approaches!
    We all hail the Hypnotoad!
    Futurama rocks

    :)

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  2. the hypnotist

    big eyes draw you in
    a clock face, tick, tock, tick, tock
    you're getting sleepy

    your phobia leaves
    no longer useful to you
    your cure effective

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  3. Greg - yeah, I think a lot of fun could be had with a hypnotist as a main character :)

    ... and your first haiku displays that nicely!

    Writebite - I find your first one rather... mesmerizing...

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