Pages

Monday July 9th, 2012

The exercise:

Write something about: the pretender.

Big day. Time for bed.

Mine:

I'm pretending
Everything's all right,
Keeping the truth
Safely out of sight.

5 comments:

  1. That's a slightly worrying little poem, given that there's no preamble to explain it. I hope everything is alright :)

    The pretender
    It's what you call it before your arm gets bruised,
    It's just a little pre-tender
    And the guy you go and show it to
    Is called... the pre-mender?

    ReplyDelete
  2. The Pretender

    My people live in
    A world of my creation
    Deep within the mind

    ReplyDelete
  3. The Pretender

    From the imagination in my head,
    Spring up world, not yet read.

    Inside this I like to hide.
    Pretending that I live inside,
    These prefect places still untouched.

    By the Encorrubtible Much!


    *giggles* inspired by Morrigan's poem above and my own slightly brain tired state of the moment... I need a week long nap!

    ReplyDelete
  4. Greg - yeah, I wanted to come up with something less... cryptic, but couldn't manage it.

    Cute slant on the prompt, I'd never have seen it coming :)

    Morrigan - beautifully summarized :)

    Cathryn - it is fun to pretend to live in our made up worlds, isn't it?

    And yes, I could go for a week long nap as well...

    ReplyDelete

Share your Daily Writing: